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Post by ER on Aug 8, 2007 22:35:08 GMT -5
It's the continue version of The Saga of Darren Shan, So i make it another name, since it's another story - The Vampire's Memory - with coming all chapters, if you haven knew this book, i will do a prologue, intro.
Intro >I had always facinated by spiders. >My life was a horror story, so i had began something like.. >Evil Has a name- Steve Leopard. >He was born Steve Leonard, but to his friends(he had friends once) he was always Steve Leopard. No dad, dislike mum, admire Power and Glory, wanted to be a vampire. >and begun with a creature of the night, Larten crepsley, Performing with a poisonous Spider - Madam Octa - At Cirque Du freak. He asked The vampire to blood him, but Larten refused, he say Steve has a bad blood. >Steve hate him for that, vowed to track him down and kill him when he grew up. >And the innocent me- Darren Shan - had heard all that.. Then my whole life changes. And there start with Madam Octa. >I, darren shan, stole madam octa, and unluckily it bites Steve, to save him, i had to search for The vampire-Mr.crepsley, and to trade with the serum, i had to become a half-vampire, be his assistant, i agreed in order to save Steve. >i found i no longer and live with humans, i faked my death, followed Mr.Crepsley walk into the night. >we reached Cirque Du Freak, and made a friend, Evra Von the snake boy. I also encounters with a human boy, Sam Grest, but he was murdered by the Wolf man then, to keep part of his soul on earth, i had to drain his blood - Mr.Crepsley - told me to, that day, i started to accept blood >Travel to the Vampire mountain to present myself to the princes, when i failed the trails, i fleed, then saw a plot of Kurda, the traitor, that event not only save me from the pit of Stakes, but made out a vampire Prince! >Mr.Tiny comes, tell bout the night of vampaneze lord was at hand, the three hunters had to search him and kill him, or not the vampire clan will fall. The hunters were me-darren Shan, Mr crepsley and another vampire prince- Vancha MArch. >after 4 time failed to kill the vampaneze lord- That's Steve ! - there comes the War or scars.
>And also i had to choose between monstrosity and death. Where i killed Steve, i would be the lord of shadows and destroy the world, as Evanna -Mr.Tiny 's daughter- Had told me. then, the climax, i killed steve, beefore steve dead, i let him killed me, i sacrifised, and no more lord of shadows
>Years after at the lake of souls, then evanna fish me out, to free my soul to the paradise, i became little person for a short while, then Evanna set a cunning trick, she hand me my diaries, then before i'm dead, i scare the little me -I come to the past by Mr.Tiny, who's was my real father- Avoid watching steve with Mr.Crepsley, and tell Mr.Tall to give the diary to the young me, when he was growned up. And
>I'm going... I'm...Going... I'm...Gone...
The story ends here. And there's where my story starts.
The Blood's Legacy
>> to be continued <<
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Post by ER on Aug 19, 2007 9:19:13 GMT -5
The Blood's Legacy
I'm going... I'm... going... I'm...gone...
I felt light...peace in my mind...Then i saw something breathetaking - Paradise - All my doubts left my mind, all my worrries simply flew away, all wonderful memories are the only left, I opened my eyes, a bright light strike into my eyes, i quickly close it, keep them close until i heard a familiar low voice.
"Vampire loves lights here, "The person walks towards me " No worries, Darren. "
Quickly, i opened my eyes, and came face to face with a tall, broad, pale vampire, with orange crop hair, a long scar on his left cheek, dressed in all red.
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Darren walked back home after th Saturday, a trip to Cirque Du Freaek, He hada been chased away by a blue-hodded people, from spying what Steve with Mr.Crepsley doing. He didn't dare to tell anyone about that. It was a sunny dady so his father decided to take them out for a drive. Darren was looking at the window, while Annie, her sister was sucking her spider web floss.
Little did he know, there was another Darren, older one, watching after him up from the Paradise, smiling sadly... sighed....
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Post by ER on Aug 28, 2007 22:33:14 GMT -5
Darren Shan
Intro: Intro>>> I am Darren Shan, 12 years old average schoolboy. Live with dad and mum. My sis- Annie Shan had dead - broke her neck - and will never come back. And left the lonely me, dad and mum. Nothing matters, i just want Annie be alive. But, i shouldn't had thought that, if she's dead, nothing bad, way bad will happen.
I was crying, all day...
Parents sobbing...
Couldn't believed it, My sister, Annie fall from her room's window and broke her neck.
I spend my whole day playing with her dolls, recall what she do everyday...how's her face... smile...
I was curious of her death, after Madam Octa- Mr.Crepsley poisonous spider bit Isabella, then Annie started to turn wierder and wierder, then Bella snapped out by herself, even the doctor don't know what's happening, Then Annie got way lot wierder, she keep looking at me oddly, and there's something different about her, i saw her eyes... Then few days, she just died...
Something was behind it all, And i know, It's of Cirque Du Freak, but i don't know how...
Letter by letters, word by words, sentences by sentences... I drop all down in my diary.
Annie Shan
No..Never..I would not feed, not on a human, still refuse to feed on human, human blood are vital to vampire, to me, but, will i refuse human blood and die?
Then i come to Cirque Du Freak.
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Hibernius had his whole day gloomy, He's holding some notebooks, - darren's diary - which was a part to wreck Desmond tiny's plan, He Staring at the book sadly, wonder when he can pass the books to the human Darren, He opened the book, read the first few pages, then came the knocking on the door of his van. He quicky keep the books and hide them, fetch for the door.
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"Hibernius! " Mr.Crepsley shooks Mr.Tall's hand. Hibernius? Hibernius Tall? wierd, but suit him.
"Mr.Tall shook back his hand, smiled briefly "Larten, pleasant to had you back again, we are short of performers right now. so run into trouble again ?"
"no..Shan was not happy, Maybe she can make friends of her own kind here.. * Mr.Crepsley said.
"Shan? She? Her?" his face brightened, then dimmed.
"Annie Shan " Mr.Crepsley tell Mr.Tall.
"Annie Shan? " Mr.Tall nodded " Where's she ? "
And Mr.Crepsley tell me to come in, and Mr. Tall look to where i was shaking.
"Can we have a moment, Larten? "Mr.Tall said.
"My pleasure, Hibernius " Then he leave me alone with Mr. Tall.
Mr.Tall look at me, study me curiously, he say nothing, i say nothing, for awhile. But then Mr.Tall opened his mouth - still, hardly moving - at last.
"You know Darren Shan? "He asked me.
"Yes, he's my brother, " I said, not surprise he know him, Darren had came to cirque Du Freak before. "Why? "
Mr.Tall chuckled. " he's a poor kid.. "
I frowned " then why you ask me about him? "
"to know, when he hit his 16? " Mr.Tall asked me.
"5 years later, why?" I said coldly.
Mr.tall nodded " Just for further information. Come, annie, i'll show you where's your hammock, you'll with Evra. You collegue in blood - mean Mr.Crepsley -had known. "
"Who'Evra" I asked,
"you'll know " He smiled, then lead me there.
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I met Evra, duh...He's a snake boy, he has scales and long green hair. then, we walked around the camp site. There appeared some blue hooded peoples.
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"Who are they? " I asked Evra.
"Little person, it's wierd they didn't come when you arrived. " Evra said.
Then appeared a thirteenth. Which was rather different, slightly taller, but no more taller, He's a plump and pudgy man, with pure white hair, thick glasses, shabby yellow suit and pair of green wellies. his left hand was toying with a red hearted watch. He smiled and waved friendly at us, i smiled sweetly back, then turn to Evra to ask who was him. But i saw Evra was frozen stiff there.
I sensed it, it's fear.
"who was him? " I asked him.
"Mr.Tiny" He said, shaking. " The leader of Little Person"
"so? " I asked.
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We head back to our tent, then i asked Evra about Mr.Tiny.
"He is Desmond Tiny " Evra said, once he had calmed down, " He called everyone to call him Des. "
"so what? "i laughed.
"This is no laughing matter! "He snapped at me. " and his last name was Tiny,"He looked at me seriously " If you combine his first Des and last Tiny. "
"Des Tiny." i said. " DesTiny? So whu....Destiny! "
Evra nodded glumly, "destiny "
"just a name, nothing to fear of. "I snorted .
" If you say so, " Evra shrugged . " If you talked with him, you'll know. "
Then come hand hans.
"evra, Annie " Hans said gloomy
"Wassup, hans? " Evra greeted.
"You have visitor, " Hans said. " Mr. Tiny"
Then evra turned pale. Sit frozen there. " Mr.. tuh.. tiny... ? "
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Post by ER on Sept 1, 2007 23:30:31 GMT -5
- To be Continued -
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Post by Luan on Sept 2, 2007 6:06:00 GMT -5
Ahaha, getting lazy, huh? Anyways, I LOVE the story. Especially the whole DesTiny thing. ;D
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Post by ER on Sept 3, 2007 23:18:48 GMT -5
We walked to Mr. Tall 's van, and Evra was still shaking. Then knocked the door. The door opened almost immediatly.
"Come in, Evra, Annie" He said politely " "Take seat "He said, like it was his home instead of Mr.Tall's.
"No...Thuh..Thanks " Evra said shakily,
"No thanks " I decided to follows Evra's lead.
"As you wish" Mr. Tiny said. " So i heard that you refuse to drink human blood? I accept it, it was disgusting matter, But not children's, it was simply scrumditilicious. "
"you can't drink from a children" I said " They will lack of blood and die. "
"So? " he asked softly, his eyes widened and so did his smile.
A chill ran down my spine, If he'd been joking, it would have been in a very poor taste, but i could have overlooked it. But i could tell from his expression that he was perfectly serious.
all of a sudden, I knew why this man, or creature was so feared. He was evil. Not just bad of nasty, but pure demonic evil. This was a man i could imagine killing and torturing thousands billions of people just to hear them scream.
"you know... "Mr.Tiny said " You look like someone i'd known. " Was Darren Shan related to you? "
"he was my brother."I said. "you met him before? "
He nodded slowly " And bring enough troubles to me. "
"What do you mean? "i gasped
"Nevermind him, " He said, "He was a nice sample creature, very good and tough, but just still a fool. "
"Darren's human " I snapped, angry at he saying him creature.
He grinned " I had use wrong words. " How i know that was a nice smile? I could see, he didn't think that, he was thinking other things that still remain mystery to me.
"Down to buisness" He said. "you had say you refuse to drink human blood? Larten, a bottle "
Mr.Crepsley handed him a bottle of red juice, human blood.
"Drink" Mr. Tiny handed me.
I shook my head, "not human blood"
Mr.Tiny laughed " Just a blood from a poot helpless human, a half vampire refuse to admit that she was a vampire assistant, such a cowar.. "
"Quit it! "I yelled angrily at him " I'm no coward, okay? "I santch the bottle from him, then drank all in a breathe .
"That's my girl.. "better than your borther. "Mr. tiny said softly.
And we left, what's so special about Darren, my brother?
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Post by winsomni on Sept 4, 2007 2:25:52 GMT -5
*is excited* I can't wait to see the rest of it! ;D Mr. Tiny seems very...bloody...
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Post by ER on Sept 4, 2007 5:51:29 GMT -5
Mr.Tiny is that - Desmond Tiny, i created his account, just for fun.
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Post by ER on Sept 4, 2007 6:13:55 GMT -5
After Annie encounter with Mr.Des, now turns to Darren. I did not want to type too long, the original is from my books, it's very long, i will make it short. But this is the romantic part! Give a rest of that bloody part. ;D
I'm Darren Shan, a school boy, 12 years old. This Cold December.... my parents decide to bring me out for a Christmas holiday. *jingle bell song turns on*
"Mum, i'll go and have a walk." I told mum, wearing my boots.
"okay, Darren, but not going for too long. "she reminded me.
My life was preety boring, lost a sister, just left me and parents. well...i spent all my day walking alone...
Not until i met a girl.
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As i stood outside a large department store, studying the window display, wondering if Annie's here, what would i buy for her, a girl walked over and stood beside me. she was dark-skinned, with long black hair, younger that me a year or two, a little shorter than me.
"Alo, Lonely."She said, smiling.
"Excuse me? "I replied, startled.
"You, "She grinned. "You look like a boy who just attend a funeral, a big moody guts, just wearing a one layer shirt and pants, a thin overcoat, boots, and no gloves, aren't you cold? "
"err... " I look at my shirt. " i'd, one year ago... i'm not feeling any cold, don't know why. Since....annie.... "
She frowned. then get it" I'm..I'm sorry to hear that... "
"Nevermind.. "I push the sad matter away.
She push out a hand"My name is Debbie"
I shook her hand, "Darren, Darren Shan"
"Darren and debbie" She smiled" Sounds good. "
"Do you always talk like this to strangers? " I asked.
"No, but we're not strangers.
"We're not? "i frowned .
"I've see you around, the boy who kick everything he saws. "She sniffed. "Laughing like a mad one. I live in the square, few doors up from the hotel, "
"So watcha doing? "She said.
"Err...nothing. Wandering about here...and there? " I muttered.
"Darren, christmas is coming, forget all those unhapoy stuffs, "She said.
I nodded sadly, then she lead me to a CD store. Then pushed the door open and held it for her.
"Why Darren,"She laughed. "people will think you fancy me."
I felt myself blushing and tried to think of a suitable response - but couldn't. debbie giggled, walked in, and left me to trail aling behind her.
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Post by winsomni on Sept 5, 2007 4:10:43 GMT -5
Aww...I absolutely love the...LOVELYNESS! Keep up the good work! ;D
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Post by ER on Sept 8, 2007 3:39:53 GMT -5
Dad and Mum gone for shopping, i decided to go library, so i left them to the town library. It was a huge.. beautifull and fully 'stuffed' library. It had been days i haven't read newspaper, update the events. The New RipperIn one month, five people were killed. They had their blood drained dry. Found behind a garbage ...... Conteur Burgess, the chief inspector of the town, say he will find the blood drainer, no matter what it takes. Dr. Goran saysDr. Arthur Goran claim that the blood drainers are vampires, But the pathologist, Dr. Jimmy Ovo says there are no such creatures. .... But he couldn't explain how the blood was drained. I thought it's was just craps, so i left it, i will never thought of that... That night, Fogs around me... I felt cold. The fogs cleared, i was standing in a sort of tunnel. There are waters, but i can say it's not, it's clouded with red liquid - Blood. i can smell the awful smell fof blood, kind of salty and disgusting. I saw a man, but he doesn't look like a human, he has purple skin, red eyes. All i could see was that, and his deadly eyes... watching at me. I thought i saw a shadow, it waas.. a girl? Except she look like someone... Annie? I opened my mouth, before i could scream, he moved with an incredible speed that not even a snake can match, he was on top of me, I broke off my scream. "Darren.. "The man whispered. I screamed. "Darren ! "the man shouted. I screamed. "DAAAAAAARREEENNN!! " a familiar voice instead. I woke in a last scream, i woke in cold sweat. "wAKE UP! "The person shake my hard. I look more clearly, he was just my dad. then i knew what had happened. I sighed. "Nightmare... " My parents didn't ask anything about that, this was the hundredth nightmare since Annie's death. But none appeared Annie, only this had. The first. I couldn't sleep anymore, altough it was only 4 in the morning, i was wide awake now. I was walking along the snowy street, the weather was freezing - The BBC says , 2 degree celcius - but i wasn't cold at all, winds blew to my face, but i felt it was just a normal cool breeze in the morning at my home. Since Annie's death, i was never happy, well.. i can say, sorrow moment were more than the rice we ate. It was Afternoon, where i met Debbie again. y heart melt again... not in sorrow, fear or anger, but in... Love. *** "So Debbie." I asked her, after a long walk with her. "wanted to go cinema? " "I thought you 'd never ask! "She laughed in delightment. "Why are we waiting, LET"S GO! " She was extremly exited, yes, we watch a silly romantic comedy, me and Debbie sit close together, where i felt the sweetness.We bought popcorn, and pepsi with two straws, we chatted away to one another during the ads and trailers. After the show, we walked back to the square, then we walked into a dark alley. Debbie took my hands in her and held on to me for comfort, which make me feel great, and plus a little nervous. I felt i'm smiling like an insane and blushing. "Aren't you afraid of the dark?"She asked. "No," The answer surpirise myself even more. Usually, i'm afraid walking in the dark, firstly i couldn't see anything, and i'm afraid of something lunged at me.....But now, i feel it was nothing to afraid of, the dark alley seems brighter that ussual, not my eyes had used to the darkness, but something unatural. "What's to be afraid of?" She shivered. "I know it's quite silly,"She said. "but i'm always half-afraid a vampire or werewolf's going to jump out and attack me, "she laughed "stupid, huh?" "Yeah. "I laughed. "I always think that too." As we emerged from the alley, i felt her studying me by the light of street lamps"What are you looking at? "I asked. "There's something different about you, Darren" She mused. "It's not something i had saw or everyone had saw in my life before. " I was worried, what different? " Did i? " "It's something inside you. I see it in your eyes sometimes. "she said " It's all the same, but suddenly, it forms to another thing, then one blink, it's all the same again.. looks magical.... " I look away, what can i say, then i grumbled "You're embarrasing me." She gave my hand a squeeze. "My dad often gives out about that. He says i'm too inquisitive. Maybe i should learn to keep quiet." We arrived at the square abd i walked Debbie to her door. I stood ankwardly on the front step, wondering what to do. Debbie solved the question for me. "Want to come in? "She asked. "Aren't your parents home? "I responded. "That's OK, they won't mind. I'll tell you you are a friend of a friend." "Well...OK, "I said., "If you are sure." "I am. "She said, smiling, then took my hadn and opened the door. And i have butterflies in my stomach now. -To be continued, wait for the next chapter, Darren and Debbie's love rising! And there will be a climax! -
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Post by Luan on Sept 10, 2007 2:54:23 GMT -5
AWESOME! Can't wait for the rest!
Debbie: Aren't YOU afraid of the dark? Me: Pffft! Like, duh! Of course I'm afraid......wait, what?
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Post by Chrissy Logan. on Sept 10, 2007 4:02:49 GMT -5
AWESOME! Can't wait for the rest! Debbie: Aren't YOU afraid of the dark? Me: Pffft! Like, duh! Of course I'm afraid......wait, what? Chrissy Dragendome is every thing ok? Debbie Looks at Chrissy Chrissy Um Holds on To D
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Post by Luan on Sept 10, 2007 4:05:01 GMT -5
Oh, don't worry. This is just Debbie, a girl from ER's story. Debbie, this is Chrissy, my best friend.
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Post by Chrissy Logan. on Sept 10, 2007 4:36:27 GMT -5
Smiles Hi Debbie
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